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The Ironhand Project: The Rise of the 4th Reich

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Posted 06 March 2007 - 07:21 PM

A story that takes place in the future.
Before you guys say anything, Der Führer's name has been changed from Marks to Willensstark. (iron will)
You guys will also see a resemblence between some events in the story and what has happened.
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Prologue- Operation: Vorboten (Harbinger)

Naval Orbital Dock Residence in geosynchronous orbit of the garrison world Remnant, December 7th 2641, 04:23 hours(STANDARD MILITARY CALENDER)


"I hate this place."
A man banged his fist against the counter.
"Will you shut up? God knows how many times you've said that," the other security guard said.
"So? They should put up a sign that says 'Welcome to Dullsville'. This is supposed to be the largest military installation in this section of the USA. You got this massive orbital dock in geosynchronous orbit, and a massive garrison, and yet guess what? Nothing happens. You even have that top secret R&D facility 22BA6C with all those funky experiments."
"Uh huh," the other guard looked at the bottom of his empty Styrofoam cup. "I'm gonna go get some more coffee. Want some?"
"Yeah, sure. Whatever."
The guard left and he looked at the screens. A warning popped up at the radar screen.
"What in-"
His eyes bulged and he hit the alarm. He hit the com switch.
"All personnel, report to battle stations. I repeat, report to battle stations on the double. This is not a drill. I repeat: This is not a drill. There are unidentified spacecraft inbound.”
The other guard opened the door and ran in.
“I leave and look what happens! What the crap is goin’ on?” He asked.
An explosion shook the room.
“As soon as you left, tunnelgates began popping up around Remnant. Capital-Ship classes used by the EFN began exiting tunnelspace. With all things considered, I didn’t think it was a good sign.”
“Come on, we need to get moving. General Mason is gonna want an explanation.”

The fleet exited tunnelspace and began moving into attack positions around the planet. The 6 carriers began launching all their fighters and bombers.
The flagship Fiendhammer (Foehammer) began leading an attack by first pounding the Residence with its massive 275mm quad cannons and then launching a wave of missiles. Ships began leaving the orbital dock and moving in towards the enemy fleet. Anti-orbital guns on the planet began firing at the fleet.
The EFN fleet fired a volley of railgun shots. Only a handful of shots hit, but they managed to tear a long section of the Residence clean off. An EFN siege ship fired a round and it went cleanly through the station, and through the reactor block. The Tri-core fusion reactors exploded and vaporized the rest of the station.




United Systems Aerospace Corps NW-227 multirole single ship 3B9RC “Boss”, battle over garrison world Remnant, December 7th, 2641 6:25 hours(STANDARD MILITARY CALENDER)

Flying with out my coffee. I’m not exactly the happiest man right now.
Col. Peter “Boss” Anderson was one of the best pilots stationed at Remnant base. He has been awarded every medal in the USAC and his unit was awarded the Presidential Unit Citation for their actions at the Beta Centauri incident, when rebels caught them with their pants down, and they had saved thousands of civilians’ lives.
He was flying in the new Nightwing-227 multirole single ship. It could be configured to excel excellently at recon, dog fighting, escorting, and anything you can think of. It excels especially at bombing, because its underside missile bay can be removed to become a bomb bay capable of holding two 55 kiloton nuclear warheads.
He turned on the unit wide comm. channel and inserted a small chip into the single ship’s computer.
“Ok, follow me on our first run. Our target is an enemy Lazarus-class carrier. We are ordered to detonate a 55 kiloton nuke to destroy this enemy carrier. A planet-based ion cannon will take the shield out, and then Blackjack, drop a nuke close to the bridge and arm it with detonate-on-impact. The rest of us will provide cover,” Boss explained.
“How big are these carriers? And who are these-“
“We got bogies!”
As they approached the carrier, it began divulging its fighters. Boss and the rest of his unit began opening up with their 25mm cannons. Three enemy fighters exploded and another one began spiraling out of control and eventually detonated.
He then opened the Nightwing’s underside and launched a missile from the rack. A fighter maneuvered skillfully and detonated harmlessly across the carrier’s shield.
The Ion cannon fired and took out the shield.
They flew towards the enemy bridge while trying to avoid the point defense guns.
“Warhead armed. Preparing to laun- Ahhh!” Blackjack screamed as a point defense gun shredded the cockpit and engines.
“Blackjack! All fighters break off! Break off the attack!”
As they attempted to get away, the remains of Blackjack’s singleship crashed into the carrier and the nuke detonated, destroying the carrier and the rest of the unit.


Empire of Fascist Nations Revenant-class Battle cruiser, Flagship Feindhammer, Aftermath of the battle at Remnant, December 7th, 2641 12:23 hours(STANDARD MILITARY CALENDER)

The EFN fleet had destroyed the anti-orbital guns with precision. They quickly mopped up the remains of the USSC fleet at Remnant and savored their victory.
“Lieutenant, I wish to speak with Der Führer immediately.”
“Jawohl!” Was the Lieutenant’s reply. Yes, sir!


Admiral Bjorn Marks thought about this “win.”
They had won, but at a great cost. Over half the battle fleet had been destroyed and a fourth of it was severely damaged. His ship had lost all of its bottom decks and also has to run on the secondary reactor.
Der Führer appeared on the view screen.
Everyone on the bridge immediately saluted and said, “Heil Willensstark!” Hail Willensstark!
“Guten Tag, mein Führer,” Marks replied. Good day, my Leader.
“How goes the Battle, Admiral?” Willensstark asked.
“We are victorious. The enemy military presence has been terminated!” The bridge crew cheered.
“Gut. Use the rest of the fleet and bombard the planet. I want nobody left alive. No witnesses. Do you hear me?”
“But sir, there are civilians down there!”
“You listen, admiral. Casualties of war, Marks. You even think about disobeying a direct order and I will send the Gestapo.”
“Jawohl… Mein Führer,” Marks could barely form the words.
The view screen shut off.
A hard lump formed in the back of his throat as he looked at the rest of the bridge, who looked as shocked as he was.
“You heard him,” his voice was weak, “Inform the fleet. Begin the orbital bombardment.”

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Posted 06 March 2007 - 07:32 PM

Doesn't contain the characteristics of a story, yet still readable. Action is always good.
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Posted 06 March 2007 - 07:33 PM

Cliche.

"Hey..it's so boring he-OH MY GOD SHIPS ARE COMING OUT OF NOWHERE, BLOW THEM UP".

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Posted 06 March 2007 - 07:35 PM

Hey, at least there's no "We've got company!" in it. No, the point is that they were caught off guard.
Hey, 343 posts. I think I should change my name to Guilty Spark :D

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Posted 06 March 2007 - 07:36 PM

No, you shouldn't.



















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Posted 06 March 2007 - 08:21 PM

I'm surprised you guys haven't noticed the connection between Pearl Harbor and the attack on Remnant. December 7th? Pearl Harbor Day? 2641? The 700th anniversery of the attack on Pearl Harbor?
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Posted 06 March 2007 - 10:40 PM

Whoohoo! It took 3 hours to post
CHAPTER ONE!!!
It's sort of a boring, but interesting chapter. Fun stuff to come!

Chapter one
Conference room 23B, United Systems of America High Command, Halcyon City, New America, December 8th 2641, 10:45 Hours (STANDARD MILITARY CALENDER)

Rear Admiral Jason Locke slammed his fist down onto the cherry-wood table in outrage.
“They did what!?”
Lt. Sanders sighed.
“We just lost Remnant. The EFN took the system by surprise and after defeating the space forces they bombarded the planet. We have concluded that Remnant is no longer under United Systems Military control and is uninhabitable.”
“When did we learn of this?”
“Calm down, admiral. We learned this not an hour ago,” President John Cage said.
“Calm down? Calm down? Why should I calm down when we just lost an estimated 8 million civilians, over a million soldiers, airmen, and sailors, a battle fleet, and our only base of operations in that section of the USA!? If anything Mr. President, you should be acting like me too. If you don’t give a **** about what happens to this democracy, or to 9 million people, one would think that a serious reevaluation of its leadership is in order! And it was the EFN no less! They attacked without warning nor provocation, and-“
“Admiral! You will not speak to the President of the United Systems of America in that manner!” Vice Admiral Nicholas Jackson shouted.
“Everybody! Will you- Will you all just shut up!” Cage shouted. “Look at the screen, for crying out loud!”
Lt. Sanders nodded at the president. “Thank you, Mr. President.
“We have just recently discovered that the EFN has changed its… Flag, I guess you could say, to this,” the screen changed, “The Dharmic Swastika. With the new German leadership in the EFN, this could be a problem.”
“This could be a problem... How…?” Col. Brooke asked.
“With all due respect, sir, but I am surprised you don’t understand this,” The screen changed again. “We also found out that the EFN government is now under the control of a new Nazi party. Col. Brooke, the Dharmic Swastika was associated with the first Nazi party in the 1930s and 40s. They murdered over 11 million people during their reign of terror and something referred to by the Nazi’s as the ‘Final Solution’ and by the rest of the world as ‘The Holocaust.’ With their strong belief in ‘Aryan Supremacy’ , the belief that true Germanic blood, or blond hair and blue eyes, they were determined to conquer the Earth and exterminate all the Jews and those the Nazi’s considered ‘defective’, such as some Christians, gypsies, the deformed, and the mentally ill. Their two organizations of secret police, The Gestapo and The Schutzstafel, were sick-minded and got special pleasure from exterminating those mentioned along with the young and elderly. Their all-time favorite way of extermination was deceiving people and then gassing them to death. In 1945, their leader Adolf Hitler shot himself in the head, and the heads of the Nazi party and many German concentration and extermination camps were sentenced to death under charges of crimes against humanity. I believe that the leader of one particular camp, Auschwitz, was hanged because he was responsible for the murder of over 2 million people.”
“You know your history, Lieutenant. I congratulate you,” Col. Brooke stated.
“Sir, I was just explaining it for your benefit, because you are the only one in this room who didn’t know that. Moving on: The leader of the EFN goes by the name of Dieter Willensstark, which means ‘Iron-will.’ He was the prime minister before the neo-Nazis’ gained control. When the neo-Nazis’ gained control of the EFN we found out that Mr. Willensstark was the leader of them, and many of his seconds, or lieutenants, in the neo-Nazi leadership became many of his most trusted officer, and the most important one is a man who goes by the name of Heinrich Herrman who is the director of naval special operations.”
A woman named Lt. Col. Amanda Cole raised her hand.
Lt. Sanders nodded. “Ma’am.”
“What do you think that Willensstark will do?” She asked. “Seeing as you’re an expert on this topic, I’m asking you.”
“Well, to be frank, I believe that if he ordered the deaths of over 8 million civilians we basically have another Hitler on our hands.” He looked at President Cage. “Sir, may I offer a suggestion?”
“Yes, lieutenant. Go ahead, shoot.”
“Well sir, I believe that we should attack the EFN ASAP. We cannot allow mass murders like this continue. I think we should begin mobilizing.”
President Cage stared at the wood finish of the table, as if he was thinking, and looked up.
“I agree. Congress is already talking about the matter. Well, do you concur with my conclusions?”
They all nodded and replied with, “Aye.”
Admiral Locke grinned. “Let’s go get these ********!” He looked at the president, “Pardon my language.”
President Cage stood up.
“Believe me, admiral, I feel as you do.”
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